Updated: Sep 23, 2020
Congratulations to Paula Bonnell and Elizabeth Tomaino, our Deep Poetry Contest Winners
Our First place winner of the Deep Poetry Contest is Paula Bonnell with her poem, “We Prepare for the Eleusinian Mysteries,” and runner up is Elizabeth Tomanio with her poem, “Black Cherries.” Deep Poetry Contest in June. We asked for writers to share their deepest poems; heart, soul, mind. Whether it’s relationships, politics, beauty, or despair. Whether it makes us shout a Walt Whitman styled "barbaric yop," we asked to hear from you. And we had so many people send in great poetry. Thank you!
Paula Bonnell's poem has a story and so does her first encounter with poetry. With permission, we've posted the first few lines of the poem by Paula Bonnell:
We prepare for the Eleusinian Mysteries
On this day, we go out to the fields
differently. On other days we
are talking or laughing, singing,
moving together. Today, on our way
we say nothing, and as we near
the wheat, we separate, so
that each of us stands in a
part of this uncut field
surrounded by a stand of grain
each at the heart of goldenness...
Bonnell shared how the poem was inspired by an allusion in Edith Hamilton's 1942 book "Mythology." The Eleusinian mysteries were one of the most secret rites, a celebration of Demeter. Bonnell cites Hamilton's description:
'The chief part of the ceremony which took place in the temple has never been described. Those who beheld it were bound by a vow of silence and they kept it so well that we know only stray bits of what was done....One of the few pieces of information we have about them is that at a very solemn moment the worshipers were shown an ear of corn which had been reaped in silence.'
Bonnell says that writing We prepare for the Eleusinian Mysteries began that same day she first read that passage. We are so glad her poem will appear in full in next year's poetry anthology "Night Forest" edited by Beth Gulley. And how did her poetry writing career begin? At fifteen Paula found a small blue book “The College Book of Verse" on her family bookshelf. She remembers it began with “Sumer is icumen in” and ended with poems by Wilfred Owen. She was hooked. Years later, her second book Airs & Voices was selected for a Ciardi publication prize by Mark Jarman, following her debut book, Message, and her two chapbooks Before the Alphabet and Tales Retold as well as a poem nominated for a 2020 Pushcart Prize. Her poems are widely published and upcoming in print and online journals and anthologies in the U.S. plus several in Canada, England, India, and Australia. She adds, "PEN/New England have been named as one of its Discovery writers and Garrison Keillor read my poem "Midwest" on The Writer's Almanac." Find more on www.paulabonnell.net
Elizabeth Tomanio is a Physical Therapist and poet. She writes poetry to understand the world better and herself in it. She reads her poetry at a local coffee shop with a group called Chapter & Verse in New Haven, CT. She won first place in the Love Tanka Contest sponsored by West Hartford Libraries with her tanka titled “What Is This?” and was accepted to the Summer 2020 issue of Please See Me for the theme Heroes with her poem titled “Reverse Transcription.” She reads her poetry at a local coffee shop with a group called Chapter & Verse in New Haven, CT.
I bought black cherries
how she would say
"the body is a temple"
I was always so casual
and careless with adding
sweet and bitter tastes.
She knew better,
for wisdom ripens with age.
I recall the night I drove her home
to a neighborhood I deemed unsafe,
watched her proceed through the unlatched gate
up the sidewalk and stairs
in her long black skirt.
How had life gotten this way?
Who treated her well,
as she had unfailingly treated me—
offering either cherries or kiwi
when it was her only meal
scraping off half-eaten food
stuck to plates, steaming residue
seeping in as the dishes rinsed,
never receiving a break.
From her small portions, she offered
for my gain.
I think about who drives her home now,
how when I pulled away
her head remained high.
In line to buy the cherries,
at the threshold of her door that night,
and all others before,
she had been looking after me.
What we love about this narrative poem is that the voice in the poem gains in compassion as the story travels to the present. We also love the imagery of fruit and the dichotomy of the fresh, the natural, and daylight contrasted with scenes of urban night, and steamy kitchens over dirty dishwater. It is unique to be able to prove that the poetic voice cares about the other characters who appear in a lyrical narrative. But to be able to show a compassionate heart emerging, to show a relationship of two coworkers and human concern in a contemporary setting is rare. Poets often try to flip the readers on their heads; to take the time of a poem to push the reader to find new insight. But what is so delightful here is the speaker in the poem being flipped on her head. Then the joy of the coolness of the fruit in several layers of meaning contrasted with those warmer but also invisible discoveries of the spirit.
Meet our volunteer of the month, Lindsey Martin-Bowen. She is a professor in fiction and poetry as well as criminal procedure. We are so thankful for her. We talked to Dr. Martin-Bowen who has recently moved to Oregon from the KC area and asked her these questions:
After so many years of serving as a poetry juror for BkMk Press at UMKC, how do you judge a great poem for publication?
Dr. Martin-Bowen cites her love of "crisp" and well-crafted poetry. She says that the audience is important to a poem as well. She asks herself, who will be reading it in this publication? But she relies heavily on the simple profundity of Emily Dickinson's reply who may have said it best:
“If I read.. and it makes my whole body so cold no fire can warm me I know that is poetry. If I feel physical as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry. These are the only way I know it. Is there any other way?”
Best, Pushcart and Pulitzer-prize nominee Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s fourth poetry collection, Where Water Meets the Rock (39 West Press 2017) contains a poem named an Honorable Mention in Writer’s Digest’s 85th Contest. Her third, CROSSING KANSAS with Jim Morrison won Kansas Authors Club’s 2017 “Looks Like a Million” contest. Her Inside Virgil’s Garage (Chatterhouse Press 2013) was the runner-up for the Kansas Writer’s Authors Club Nelson Award, 2015, and The Gulf Times, LoHud.com, and The Kansas City Star named her first collection, Standing on the Edge of the World (Woodley Press/Washburn University) one of the Top 10 Poetry Books in 2008. Cicada Grove (a novella) won the grand prize in the 1987 Barbara Storck Creative Writing Contest. Her poems have appeared in New Letters, I-70 Review, Thorny Locust, Flint Hills Review, Coal City Review, Phantom Drift, Ekphrastic Review (Egyptian Challenge), Rockhurst Review, and other lit zines. Poetry is her way of singing.